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Limited Edition 2005-11-19 . chapter 3
i didnt like this epilogue at all...it almost destroyed the whole story...
Limited Edition 2005-11-19 . chapter 2
wow i really didnt get this at all. why did he suddenly get deaf and why was it eriks fault? please email me about it, i dont get it at all.
Limited Edition 2005-11-19 . chapter 1
I love the way you've started this fic o.O You're not good with summaries, just like me (I SUCK at summaries.) But I adore your writing style ^^ And the plot is also good~
Esquirella 2005-07-22 . chapter 3
Cute ending.
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-21 . chapter 3
Part of me is very like..."are you serious?" but if you are then you are, and hey, at least it was happy. Heh. It’s good that it ended up he was really going to be okay. (and I find it amusing that he was taking sign language as an easy way for his credits. My sister is doing the same thing. Lol.) Aww. Fairly tale ending. Very, very sweet. I was really hoping to see more of this, but I do understand what happened. Sometimes things don’t turn out the way you expected them to at first. I enjoyed it while it lasted, and I’ll definitely look out for more stories from you. (hmm, and I hope you don't mind if I friend you on livejournal.)
Pure 2005-05-28 . chapter 2
I'm interested in how this turns out, so keep it comin'... Uh, also, I've had an ear infection before and I lost my hearing(in both ears) and I can tell you right now that it is the most frustrating thing. I couldn't understand, nor converse with, other people. Writing on paper helped me to get my thoughts across but it was very hard for my boyfriend to not be frustrated... I dont know if that helps.. good start tho ^_^
xanthofile 2005-04-12 . chapter 2
wow...this definately has some potential! i'm going to be keeping an eye on the updates for this one for sure.

only thing that confuses me...the sight anomaly/thing goes away, right? he has normal sight but no hearing?
azinineMC 2005-04-11 . chapter 2
That was interesting... *SNICKERS* (^_^)
dyers-eve 2005-04-11 . chapter 2
Aww, so adorable. Erik isn't evil i guess, although i don't mind evil that much... i want to know why Erik changed his mind. Has he been in love with Caleb all the time? Wow, awesome, update soon X
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-04-10 . chapter 2
Lol. I LOVED the ending. The whole chapter really, but mainly the end. I definitely like Erik more this chapter. Seems like a sweetie. And um...dont' know if you still need to know, but in my city, there is a school for the deaf. If that helps any. Lol. So, please continue soon.
Song of Calandra 2005-04-10 . chapter 2
I like this so far. I wouldn't worry too much about making it seem accurate, I remember learning in English once that if you fake knowing something convincingly, people will think you really know it, or something like that. lol. You've convinced me.
Sakureth 2005-04-10 . chapter 2
o_O Woo! I'm reviewing again! Anyway. I want to be your beta. :O Your email wasn't working for me...it was all "RAWR! O_O THIS DOESN'T EXIST!" and yeah. xD I swear to god, I write better than I talk. Read my stories.

Oh! o_O And this chapter was awesome. Really. Poor Caleb.
Esquirella 2005-04-10 . chapter 2
This was a great second chapter. I can't wait to see where you take it!
Esquirella 2005-04-10 . chapter 1
That was an awesome start!
d'Neronique 2005-04-09 . chapter 1
Other than the fact that 'Caleb' is a sorely overrused name, especially seemingly so in this genre - as is bullies and their hottness thereof - go for it. I liked parts.
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