that was, to say the least, AWESOME.

I just realized Mr. Nivier is Reivin backwards. Sneaky sneaky.

-Mags

Cliffhangers = Evil.

-Mags

The ending was confusing, but confusing is okay because it leads to questions, and questions lead to the want for answers. Always a good tactic. ;)

-Mags

I've actually read this story twice before, and now I've come back to read it just because i miss you characters. ^^
Awesome story

I really liked this. It was very epic! Loved Matt and Ravin, you even got my liking Sarah towards the end :)

Okay, I did stay up after curfew, JUST to finish reading your story.

You should post Xiphias' and Sepfeer's story. I would LOVE to read it.

And you said it yourself that you'd like to fill the story out with more details. I've been saying that you should put more details. DO IT! It doesn't matter if it gets a little long. Heck, Harry Potter can get a 10 page book, why can't you?

I'm onto the sequel! Not tonight, but starting tomorrow, it's The Last Judgement TIME! *cheers* Find me there, okay?

Ooh. An Awakening... *laughs*

Sad chappy... *cries*

Well Written chapter. *cheers*

Sad Chapter... *morns*

Anyway... It was wonderful! So many details. I was seriously crying at the end. There is NO way that I'm leaving just yet. With only ONE chapter left to go, I might just have to push curfew a little bit.

NEXT! And Final!

Again. I HATE REIVIN!

It was a good chapter! I'm a little confused, though. Did Arli go with them, or not?

Davin... I miss him...

Next?

o.o *wimper*

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Those are my feelings about this chapter. Now for the technicalities. Well written. Enough to bring tears to my eyes. Uhg... I HATE REIVIN!

Anway, well written chapter. I didn't like it, because I loved Davin.

Next...

I hate Reivin... Do you know that?

Anyway, I love this chapter! So many details, so many visuals. And the emotion really gets to you.

From the earlier chapters to now, your writing REALLY improved. Happy days!

Next one!

I love fluff. Fluff fluff fluff! It's adorable.

The beginning bogs a little bit, but the ballroom scene was perfect!

Next!

Davin's evil. I swear he is. Or maybe you are. Ending a chapter like that? "Do you love Sarah?" You make me want to read on, SO much! But no, I have to review. XP

Anyway, this is also a good chapter, really showing that Atticus DOES love Sarah, and that he would be lost without her. Also, it gives the hint that the dragons know a little bit more about 'Matt' than they realize.

Next!

More Fluff!! I hope you know, I love it when you do that between Atticus and Sarah. They're made for each other, as I've said numerous times.

So, The Demi-god was there after all. Now why is he buring this town? Vigil was because it was full of sorcerers. But this one? I'm confused.

Anyway, we got fluff out of it! Bring on the Fluff!

I love Davin. Using his wings to get the girl, huh? *laughs* It's SO like him. I easily could see him doing that again.

Atticus... Poor him. Always getting cut up, spelled, nearly killed. That's his life, I suppose, though.

Next chapter! ((By the way, just how many hybrids ARE there?))