:'( It's so sad.. I love it.

Good Poem.

Another brilliant poem. Good work.

Truly good. These word I couldn't do myself or possible myself. This is wonderful.

OMG tear it's so so so beautiful! I love it... even thou im pushing anarcy i love the rush of emotions that this poem gives me! It also helps that the fact that my sister is in the army and is in the "war" yea it's a lovely poem, it has great imagery (i don't want to try to spell!) lol i love this poem! keep writting, i'll support you!

Wow. That's...sad. I like the ending ,Michelle

That was awesome. It showed some really good emotions. wow. i really liked it.

bravo, holy smackaroly, what a great poem, I just thought I should look on some more of your stuff, which is always good.

Wow! Great poem! I would like to thank you for the wonderful reviews you have sent me. I appreciate it. You have done a much better job at this kind of poem than I have. Imagery is what I try to capture in many of my poems and once again you have exceeded my abilities. Atleast I know I have competition now. Just joking! I loved it!

Beautiful poem. I love the way its written.

great job

i love this poem its really great!I espessially love the last line...it kind gives you goose bumbs...but it a good way. Also, thx for reviewing my poem i hope you'll review some more. Love EBC

Incredibly beautiful and wonderfully written. Very heartfelt and absolutely amazing. The rhyming helped to set the mood. I don't know, maybe it's just me, but this line seemed kind of confusing: What if yours truly kills you now?My favorite line was the last one, summed it up quite well.

thats deep (thats a compliment btw). You've really shown the feeling of what's happening- Beau