Wow. just wow. lovely.

I really like it. It reminds me of "Under My Skin" by SKillet (which is currently one of my favorite songs). I really, really like it. It's beautiful. I think it's going on my faves list.

beautiful acrostic pieces. both wonderfully written, i love these. the first is so filled with imagery, vividly describing His pure grace. and the second is beautiful conveyed. i love the consonance and alliteration in the fourth line. great use of metaphor in both. :) keep up the awesome work. ^_^

If my closed my eyes and recited both of your poems in my head I could imagine myself in a scenery with flowers. Real cool. Keep it up

Pure, beautiful and powerful. I am at a loss of words by this. Beautiful.

!~* Noelle *~!

That is beautiful. Cute and amazing. ^-^ A cute and powerful poem! Well done!

!~* Noelle *~!

*claps* Great poem especially as acrostics are hard to write. Beautiful imagery.

Just so purely beautiful. This was just so lovely. This poem actually has nothing to do with the poem I'm think of, that I've written. I know you've already reviewed it, though. It was called Among The Flowers. I'm glad you really loved it. Actually, it kind of deals with a true story. A lot of my poems do, actually. You've reviewed a lot of poems that is actually about a friend of mine. This particular poem, was about how she was feeling when she found out that a friend of her's from childhood (when she was around five years old), was dead. She needed comfort, and her boyfriend wasn't around. That was the inspiration. Well, anyway, I loved this poem, and it reminds me of that certain friend. Thank you for writing such beautiful poetry.

excellent acroustic poem; very descripitive here! i can very well picture that daisy and that sun shining down on it, even without the author's note. thanks for sharing and keep writing!