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| Ironic Presence 2006-11-04 ch 2,  | abuseWow. just wow. lovely. |
| Ironic Presence 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseI really like it. It reminds me of "Under My Skin" by SKillet (which is currently one of my favorite songs). I really, really like it. It's beautiful. I think it's going on my faves list. |
| obsidian katana 2005-04-20 ch 2, | abusebeautiful acrostic pieces. both wonderfully written, i love these. the first is so filled with imagery, vividly describing His pure grace. and the second is beautiful conveyed. i love the consonance and alliteration in the fourth line. great use of metaphor in both. :) keep up the awesome work. ^_^ |
| brknheartlonely 2005-04-10 ch 2, | abuseIf my closed my eyes and recited both of your poems in my head I could imagine myself in a scenery with flowers. Real cool. Keep it up |
| poetic abortion 2005-04-09 ch 2, | abusePure, beautiful and powerful. I am at a loss of words by this. Beautiful. !~* Noelle *~! |
| poetic abortion 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThat is beautiful. Cute and amazing. ^-^ A cute and powerful poem! Well done! !~* Noelle *~! |
| lime-girl 2005-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuse*claps* Great poem especially as acrostics are hard to write. Beautiful imagery. |
| Rose Dark Thorn 2005-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust so purely beautiful. This was just so lovely. This poem actually has nothing to do with the poem I'm think of, that I've written. I know you've already reviewed it, though. It was called Among The Flowers. I'm glad you really loved it. Actually, it kind of deals with a true story. A lot of my poems do, actually. You've reviewed a lot of poems that is actually about a friend of mine. This particular poem, was about how she was feeling when she found out that a friend of her's from childhood (when she was around five years old), was dead. She needed comfort, and her boyfriend wasn't around. That was the inspiration. Well, anyway, I loved this poem, and it reminds me of that certain friend. Thank you for writing such beautiful poetry. |
| marshbar960 2005-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseexcellent acroustic poem; very descripitive here! i can very well picture that daisy and that sun shining down on it, even without the author's note. thanks for sharing and keep writing! |