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first of the gang 2006-11-20 . chapter 1
I love your short stories, especially this one. Even after reading and reading over again, I still don't understand the bumper sticker thing Sean was planning. I'm sort of thinking it's not something to be understood, but either way, I still like it a lot.

I'm also kind of sad that you took out certain parts (adolf hitler, child-toucher assumptions) but at least I can just jump back to AFF for the other version. As much as I love BTB and WC, I think I like your short stories a little bit more, for sake of not having to wait. Ahah. =]
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