   thenewromantic 2005-05-11 . chapter 1Wow, I love this! I can completely relate to it - a dream that feels like it's what your whole life is centred around and working towards, no matter how bad things get or how unrealistic people say you are! This is a great song. |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-05-02 . chapter 1i iddnt review yet? shame on me! yell at me when i dont. im sorry! alright now this: awesome writing! |
 incandescent.smiles 2005-04-21 . chapter 1simply put, I love this. It's wonderful, amazing, beautiful, any other nice adjectives you can think of. I especially like how you repeat the second staza... great job! and now I am off to find my toast! (hey, can you blame a girl for being hungry at 6:30 in the morning?)
~leila* |
 CoolBeans18s 2005-04-19 . chapter 1The flow is beautiful. Wonderful work!
~ CoolBeans18s |
 AllyCred 2005-04-12 . chapter 1i love it...the flow is just amazing...so beautifully written...very good! lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
 someday-i-will 2005-04-10 . chapter 1Quite a lot repetative but I suppose it can be a good effect, nice idea. |
 poetic abortion 2005-04-09 . chapter 1`Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful.
!~* Noelle *~! |
 HauntedMisery 2005-04-09 . chapter 1Great job on this! |
 SayIt'sWrong 2005-04-09 . chapter 1Ooh I like it! Very fast moving and the flow is great. Good job! QueenVixta |
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