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| soaps'nsuds 2008-08-24 ch 33,  | abusei loved it!:D the epilogue was just perfect. i secretly wish that i would marry someone from the music industry.:)) i just have an aversion to earplugs. please don't kill me. however, i still believe that it can be improved. the arguments are a bit too immature. i mean, why can't they listen to each other first before someone walks out? *sigh* fine, they are juvenile so i guess that's the excuse. hehe. more power. i see a lot of potential so i'm definitely watching out for more.:D |
| llgg89375 2008-08-16 ch 33, | abuseOMG!BEAUTIFUL ENDING! |
| RoseLife 2008-08-13 ch 33, | abuseOH WOW! i love this story! its so incredible haha yes, i was SO surprised with Vogue and Toby! but the ending for Sen and Leif was so awesome ^.^ the plot/story line i think was what i really loved, you used realistic problems and hurdles which made the story all the more relatable :D WELL DONE |
| WTF 2008-08-10 ch 33, anon. | abuseI would have absolutely adored this story, but... WHY ON EARTH DID SHE LOSE HER VIRGINITY TO...TO THAT GUY?! That ONE part just totally ruined the story for me. I wanted her to lose her virginity to Leif. I mean... what a KILLER. HER FIRST TIME. AND FOR THE MOST STUPID REASON. Just...would have been so much better. -_- |
| WTF 2008-08-10 ch 5, anon. | abuseUh, no one gives a sht if they wear black or not... Wtf is wrong with you? Is that how you think about people wearing black clothing? Retarded. |
| Kisnie 2008-07-30 ch 33, | abuseoh. my. goodness! THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING!! This is probably my favorite story I've ever read on FictionPress. I saw Leif walking away from Sen and I was like, "OHMYGOD, NO! NO, LEIF, NO! DON'T DO IT!" Then I saw the epilogue and it was so freaking sweet. aw. Amazing story. Ah-may-zing. You're a great writer! I'm off to read your other stories now, and once again, I must squeal. ek. That was freaking amazing! |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-19 ch 29, | abuseyou really confuse me - from what you wrote in chapter 25/26 i dont think ryder and sienna actually had sex right? i mean they certainly were about to but i dont think they actually did the act. why are there mentions of them actually having done it everywhere? |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-14 ch 33, | abusewhoa what a whirlwind lol... |
| Shelbaybayz 2008-07-08 ch 33, | abuseI HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW, AGAIN! that was a very very very very mean trick! i loved ur story i've been reading it all day lol its now 51 minutes past midnight |
| Shelbaybayz 2008-07-08 ch 32, | abuseI HATE U SO MUCH RIGHT NOW! omg why! well im going to go read the epilogue..expect another review from me -glare evilly- |
| Shelbaybayz 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseDude I totally want to know what happened with them now, I was going to stop reading but this caught my interest lol. Good story but like in the begininning it was a little confusing |
| Jayjack 2008-07-04 ch 33, | abuseI figured Toby was going to end up with Vogue. i love her nickname and this story. :D |
| CrossMyHeart 2008-06-25 ch 33, | abuseYAY!! happy happy happy happy ENDING! Sorry, i just ate A LOT of sugar while reading this. YAY! i like the epilogue, 'cause this way i dont feel like crying at the end. i dont like crying. It makes me sad. Unless its happy crying. Then in that case its okay. But it still makes my face blotchy-red and my eyes bloodshot... And HEY didn't she leave her luggage on the plane? Haha, she sent it NY without her! Although maybe her knickers wanted a little trip? Get out of the drawer, she the world? Who knows? Who am i to judge Sienna's knickers? XxCrossMyHeartxX |
| claireponcherrii 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abusei like this |
| geminibaby6789 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this story! Thanks! |