WOW OMG This is like a hell cool story lol i like how ur postioning the goths not to be stereotypically depressed coz it isn't true (yes i'm a goth)and i gotta say Lief is a hell cool name...Keep Going! *thumbs up*

Interesting! Ahh, I see how A Dark Obsession by Jaskey got your inspiration. Well done so far. Update soon will you please? :) Story line is indeed interesting.

oh! I like this story so far. Sienna seems so sweet. But those silly goths, judging a book by its cover. :-P I hope she doesn't get too hurt. I can't wait to see what happens. Its a good beginning. The only thing I'm bothered by is the family set up. What a horrible thing to do, split a family up like that. Do people really do that? I wasn't sure how realistic it was. But it did help set the tone. Great job. Hope you update soon and complete this one. :-D

oh please keep writing this story i like it

OMG SO FAR I LOVE IT! and take your time on perfect sin. wants your writers block is over i known that the next cahpter is going to be awesome and i don't want you to hurry, 'cause then it might well suck! lmao! probably not because i never think a chapter sucks! lol.. anyways, i can't wait to read more of this story! later!

i like this story...v. interested in where it's going...please UPDATE!

Nicely written, it'll be good to see how this story fans out...

very good start. i hope you post soon. it's ok i am addicted to goths too!

This is really good so far. And I completely agree. I had never seen a goth before in person, and then one day I saw a bunch of them at this store, and they all had black on and eyeliner and all that stuff. They were SO flippin hot! Heh... I'll stop rambling now. Update soon!

ah you have to update soon. I like it so far.

I like it .. hope U update soon ! :)

Its a good start, I will have to keep an eye on this story.

I really like this, I'd love to read more soon! :)