HA you sad criticise you...well to be honest i can't. Your poems are beautiul, the words flowand feel real..(And im tired so tis wil be a strange review). They just kinda work...well done...

Yellow-sock

Wow. This poem is awesome! :D:D:D You have a true gift for words.

I like it. I also like birds. THank you for the review on I think I love him. I cant really talk to him because hes always in a different class and with a big group of friends, so I just say an ocassional hi. I would ask him out, but Im kinda young, lol. Keep up the great work!

there's some truth in the content of this piece! keep writing D