Reviews for David and Goliath

SweetWithUncertainty 2006-04-23 ch 1,	awesome, simply awesome
Myke Padfoot 2005-09-10 ch 1,	I never understood Haiku's. Especially this one.
Pheobe Meryll 2005-09-03 ch 1,	Pretty neat...not big on Haiku (s?) but I thought I'd check this out...interesting concept, that Goliath knew in his "heartest of hearts" that he was destined to fail...I do like that, though if I had my way it would be the last line of a long train of descriptives. :P
kashe 2005-05-17 ch 1,	this is a very interesting haiku. hm...very think stiring? no thought stirring. arg i give up. good poem tho!
.the twinkling of an eye 2005-04-17 ch 1,	it was actually pretty good!
THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-04-10 ch 1,	Great job! Love it! It's very different. Once I connected "I" with Goliath, I got it!
Kys 2005-04-10 ch 1,	I like. Oh, and to Mithril, haikus are SUPPOSED to be "three teenie lines long"
Aslan Israel 2005-04-10 ch 1,	Aye, but I don't think Goliath knew that... Still good haiku, though.
PyroHiroshi 2005-04-09 ch 1,	Hmm... hmm... hmm... interesting. :) check out my piccie... http : // w . deviantart . com / deviation / 17005935 / You know the drill... :) take out the spaces... :p
Mithril-Moony 2005-04-09 ch 1,	ahem. how do you expect to get reviews if it's three teenie lines long?