from what I've read, you're an amazing poet and you have an eclectic style. sometimes I hate writing these reviews because they can sound pretentious... but I want you to know I can definitely relate to this poem, so much. I used to feel like that all the time. I can enjoy poetry a lot, but only sometimes can you find poetry that really makes you jolt, makes you feel. this poem was one of those. especially the last night. anyways, thanks for your time. great job.

Hmmn, I think it needs more emotion, and rhyming is good too. Still I think you did a good job.