I know what you mean here. This is really... I don't know... ugly. In a good way. I like the way you sound bitter [past your years, my friend]. I hope you don't feel too bad about your appearance anymore...

reflects well those self-loathing thoughts we have at times in our lives...imagery is very vivid

¿Why? ¿What is it that you so hate that you would punish your body by regurgitating what would nourish you? I'd rather you go punish your body by lifting weights or running—but, not your stomach. m

odi et amo(I love and I hate)

like a horror movie, cliched but it fits

I hate photographs (especially color) black and white hold more depth and majesty, but they both capture everything and everything fake

I enjoyed reading this, the lines seem to be glued together. Really easy to read, the language seems well-thought of and interesting.

haha, the long lines are meant to add to the effect of the poem - to show the lingering-ness of the imperfection the person sees in the mirror. =)

You use very unique description that always manages to bring across the most vivid imagery to the reader. The only gripe I have is that some of the lines are a tad long, so when read aloud it sounds a bit weird. =x But great nevertheless!

"The Mirror bears a truth ; " That is so true, insecurities come out to play and taunt you when you look in the mirror.

Very nice Work, very nice imagery.