|Reviews for Seven Boats|
| Luma 9/23/06 . chapter 1
Another lovely poem. I especially liked "Day has come and left with grace/Measured with each rising crest" It's really very, very good. I could almost smell the sea, hear the waves lapping against the pier and see the golden rays of the sun glittering on the surface.
| Nobody-n-Particular 5/9/05 . chapter 1
Soft and relaxing.
| Simon James 4/9/05 . chapter 1
i like. nice concept. nice
| sylvia's syndrome 4/9/05 . chapter 1
Hmm, this makes me think about Lord of the Rings and the elves sailing away into the west. I see by your penname that I might not be too far off the mark.
My only suggestion for this is changing "left" in the third line to "gone," just because I think it would sound prettier. But that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work!