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  kellysjay 8/9/05 . chapter 12 i love this story. It reminds me of the people i grew up with .I want to know how it ends . When will i find that out ? PLease let me know how i can obtain a copy of this whole story. Thanks, KellyP.S. I have not read a whole lot of books from begining to if they really interested me in the first few lines. That should tell you how i feel about yours, I read the whole thing |
 CostumeForAGutterball 5/14/05 . chapter 9Quite nice - the lyrics really suit your story and bring out the emotions that I think you are trying to convey-anyways, they worked for me!Please continue this story-tis one of my faves! |
| t h e m u s h r o o m 5/8/05 . chapter 9 more? me PS, going great..._ YAY! |
| Forbidden Smiles 5/8/05 . chapter 9 When that flashback was taking place, I instantly thought, "Man, a car accident should happen right here." And it did! Nice. |
| Saint Rebel 4/26/05 . chapter 8 Kimmi my love, It's Kiki again. I love this story so far whether you revise it or not. I love Bam to. Poor Lizzi. She has all these guys chasing her and wanting her. I would've screamed "I don't want to be either one of you!" If they were fighting oer me. Maybe one of them would've grown up. I loved when you put Flavor Of the Weak by American Hi-Fi in Chapter 2. I haven't heard that song in foorrever...lol. Much love sweetie and keep writing. I know exactly how it feels have a story feel wrong even though it is said that it is good. |
| Saint Rebel 4/26/05 . chapter 1 Kimmi my love, I love this story. I love the main character's personality. I love the song you used in chapter 1 and I actually listened to Iris when I read the first chapter. It seems you've got Bam pegged perfectly and I do love him to. Thanks for saying I inspire you. was touched when I read that on your page. Sadly I have to go school now but I don't want to because I want to read the rest of what you have here. |
| Forbidden Smiles 4/25/05 . chapter 8 It's good! |
| Forbidden Smiles 4/21/05 . chapter 7 It's all good. It's somewhat decreasing now... |
| s.g 4/20/05 . chapter 1 awsome ,i cant wait to read more . ur a great writer! |
| t h e m u s h r o o m 4/19/05 . chapter 7 i will be sad if i do not see more of this! QUICKLY! anyways, good writing! no, not good, GREAT! haha! it didn't three weeks to leave a review this time! me |
| t h e m u s h r o o m 4/18/05 . chapter 6 i would like to see more of this, very very soon...okay? |
| t h e m u s h r o o m 4/18/05 . chapter 2 ! OH MY GOD! I am SORRY! I got the email like...two weeks ago that you had updated, but I was laughing so hard about your signature (which, btw, is HALARIOUS!) that I forgot to read and...O.o I feel bad! Anyways, GREAT! I love the line, That woman trusts me about as far as she can throw me. OMG! AWESOME! I laughed at that. Anyways, keep it up...ON TO CHAPTER THREE! |
| CostumeForAGutterball 4/16/05 . chapter 6 Wow. Great chapter-so I guess there is a point to staying home sick! *huggs* Hope you're feelin better.. *smile* Great song choice-'First Date' is one of my boyfriend's fave songs, and I was missing him this morning, so the theme of the chapter really reminded me of him! Go You! LOL...thanks! This is absolutely one of my fave stories on this site-you are awesome!*more huggs for you!* |
| Forbidden Smiles 4/15/05 . chapter 6 I'm sorry to say, but...I'm so confused! This chapter was very...unorganized, but random, which was a good thing for me. Uhm, yeah...I suggest you work on your organization skills. (: |
| doragon41 4/14/05 . chapter 5 not to pick but it wasnt exactly what we or i wanted i mean the whole moments were kind of ruined when she thought she might be pregnant...*sigh* |
