heartbreaking. very- pulsating. I adored it, it got my seal of approval.

*claps* Amazing...I know exzactly what you mean...This is original...Keep it up.--pammy-

I am just wondering..do you write these poems of yours based on real feelings?*puzzled*they seem so...well,real to me,like they`re your own emotions...you still make me upset.

*huggles from your fan*

Fantastic. Utterly and truly fantastic. I love, love, love this poem! Put it to a beat and it's the perfect song. I LOVE it! Keep up the great work!

i swear to god, in this poem you're writing down exactly what goes through my head and what i've felt exactly the way i feel it! and i cry every time! keep on writing! i wont let anything of mine get published unless yours does too! you're awesome, even if you dont think so