 n.p-simmons 2009-02-06 . chapter 1Hey, I love the ending. It sums it up perfectly, in that almost everything a person will desire usually ends up being bad for them. The poem also captures the thoughts of the teacher superbly, how many of them have exactly the sam e thought of whether they're being seen as their occupation rather than as a human being with thoughts, with emotions, with flaws; but it also makes you think how powerful emtions can't always be controlled or analysed: they just ARE. They may be wrong, but there isn't much you can do to stop from feeling them. Lovely job. |