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Reviews For: A Teacher's Desires
n.p-simmons 2009-02-06 . chapter 1
Hey, I love the ending. It sums it up perfectly, in that almost everything a person will desire usually ends up being bad for them. The poem also captures the thoughts of the teacher superbly, how many of them have exactly the sam e thought of whether they're being seen as their occupation rather than as a human being with thoughts, with emotions, with flaws; but it also makes you think how powerful emtions can't always be controlled or analysed: they just ARE. They may be wrong, but there isn't much you can do to stop from feeling them. Lovely job.
Queen of Dragonnor 2007-09-02 . chapter 1
God, I absolutely love this poem...
Katja de Wit 2007-07-29 . chapter 1
Good job! I really like the flow and I simply love how the last line's simply 'sinful', really a great way to end it.
~Katja
simpleplan13 2005-04-10 . chapter 1
its funny how you kinda feel bad for him in this poem... i lvoe the last 2 lines
the.pink.life 2005-04-09 . chapter 1
Holy **, that was awesome. Wow. I'm just blown away. The short lines really do something for this poem, give it a restless feeling or something. It's just good. Great job.
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