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| Queen of Dragonnor 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseGod, I absolutely love this poem... |
| Katja de Wit 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseGood job! I really like the flow and I simply love how the last line's simply 'sinful', really a great way to end it. ~Katja |
| simpleplan13 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abuseits funny how you kinda feel bad for him in this poem... i lvoe the last 2 lines |
| the.pink.life 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseHoly **, that was awesome. Wow. I'm just blown away. The short lines really do something for this poem, give it a restless feeling or something. It's just good. Great job. |