update?

Jesus I love this. I love this so so so much, it's INCREDIBLE. It's amazing, you know. Just..wow. **, how did you do that? It was amazing.
I love Joshua like mad. (always had a thing for the crazy ones) I love how you brought through his personality, it's just so real and so there, you know? Wow. Oh god. Please continue this. It's so amazing.

"So Jonah has resorted to drinking…and I have resorted to this. What a mess we are, together and apart."

Every once in a while you drop these one-liners that just get me. This is one of them. Brilliant.

and this review marks #500!
I feel an undeserved sense of accomplishment. You wrote the story after all. lol.

I love Joshua's chapters. He's always so much more intense than Jonah and I love it. his thought always seem so profound, even when their not. lol.

1 more till five hundred!
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The part where Nathan puts Jonah in a choke-hold has to be one of my favorite quotes from an story.


"However, this moment is quickly disturbed by a sharp pain to my neck and the sudden lack of oxygen. This new, annoying moment made possible, I believe by ** Nathan. Who is undoubtedly taking me in a choker-hold. And will dearly pay when I recover my fading consciousness."

priceless
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I love Janet. I think we would totally be friends... you know, if she were real.

and i think this is the first a/n thats made me laugh.
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haha. I can totally see this becoming a steamy classroom scene.

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and it only got better with Josh's pov.

I am so determined to get this story to 500 reviews. lol.
It's the little goals that count =]


and i love this scene.

I cant believe how real Barb's character is. It's astounding.

I have to say that you got the cycle of anger pinpointed exactly right.

Ive read this story before but apparently I didn't review, and it's just too awesome to only read once.
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Updation. It's a demand, woman.

UPDATE!

Is it really over? This was one of the few actually good yaoi stories I've read! Great Job on it! But in the future could you please not make your chapters so long? Its tiring to just read the first chapter of the story. Anyway, great job!

so is this chapter technically saying that after he heard that and saw the memories he and jonah have drifted apart from eachother? man that sucks and its sad! also is it saying like josh and reverting back to his old self? will they be okay?

luv the story soo far! one thing though that i cant understand is when u changed the point of view to someone totally out of the picture! i mean im not saying anything bad im just asking that when u do, do u mean for it to have more detail? and if so detail on what? i hate when its from kelly's point of view but i read it anyways just need a heads up on why u really do that?