aw, this is really good! i love it! well done!

I absolutely fell in LOVE with this one! (pardon the pun) Amazing! Shows your love clearly and directly. Deep. I love it! I have no critisism.

Write hard, write long, write until dawn~TLDG

i have smthg like this, called your hug, posted. awesomeness! we all need this sometimes :)

Another deep one. You're good at this ^_^

Mucho thanks fer the review!!

Whoa. The strength of the emotion conveyed here would be enough to knock anyone over! Hands down one of your best poems! Keep at it!

wow, deep, emotional, make sure this guy knows how u feel( if its a guy ), when ya feel like this never give up n it, make sure its all out in the open, all cards down

Wow! That's all I can say. I feel this way sometimes.

this is very nice...keep writting..just a tip work on the flow of the poem...~Amanda