Wow! This is cool!! And Egypt is one of my favorite topics, along with Anubis, God of the Dead, my favorite Egyptian god. Man, I'm hyper! must have been from the two cokes I just drank! Update soon!! AWESOME STORY!

Good luck trying to sleep with that noise! Hi I'm new to fictionpress! Trying out my original ideas, if I even have any...had a few good ones, this is a good one...but I won't steal it! I think it's awesome! Continue please!

I like this story please update again soon.

i love this story i just found it please update!

Good job. I can't wait til your next update.

YAY NEW CHAPPIE! Really good, liked it a lot!

Wow, I really like this story. I was actually surprised by how much I like it lol. Please write more in the near future if you get the opportunity.

^_^ good job please update soon/ and maybe a little longer?

i wish u luck on your writing!
A Dark White Rose

aw, its cute :D i wonder, will she end up with Anubis? hm, update!

I love this story, the whole idea of it is just awesome =] But you should try to update sooner lol the suspense is killing me [and has for a while] Great job and keep writing!

Too cute. I have a love of mythology, too, and the slight twisting of it.

~Bella, Ayaerhis

I've been waiting for the update. It's a great story. Keep going.

wow, their relationship is getting complex. i like it, and you play on feelings that everyone feels. good job, just watch out for the errors in grammar. update soon

Hello,
I love your story, you have a really good way of writting, and I love your plot, plz keep writting it and post it soon. Thanks for entertaining me so much, mel

well you may cringe at the style but i LOVE it. it's different from what i would have expected from the title. ANubis seems down to earth.please updae, i know your busy with class but it is summer now so you have time. thanks