wow, this is absolutely amazing!

i love it

Romantic... sad... classic love poem. I like it! You might want to work on your flow again a little bit, some of it just kind of clashes, like, some lines longer then others, some too short... not really a big deal, but it takes away from its beauty. I love the emotion you show in this poem. Another deep one!

Write hard, write long, write until dawn~ TLDG

*hugs and hugs and hugs* aw :(

wow, deep, happens alot now a day, we dont know what we do to others, but very deep and emotional, keep it up

Deep, sclicing...The emotion conveyed here passes through the reader much like a hot knife through butter. Keep it up!

Hm... this is deep. Good job!

really good