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| RandomTurdBurger 2005-04-09 ch 1,  | abuseNot the best rhymes, but good job anyway. Write on! |
| katmufla 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseso near...so die, made no sense to me. the repitition of "here" and "near" were nice...but it got really old and tired at the end. this was really intersting though. |