the "youÕve torn me apart" is the only mistake i see cause of the o there,lol.. but yeah, flows beautifully. awesomely done

wow...i love this poem...especially the ending! brilliant job! ~angel4soul~ps: thanks for the reviews

we can all relate & i love the 2 lines you repeat

That was like a whole stream of thought with slight depth but utter simplicity. First loves are always heartbreaking.