very good story or poem I really liked it and I think your an excellent writer but thats just me . I hope you can write some more stories or poems because I love stories or poems that come from some one else. Im just starting to write some poems and Im not that good but I hope I become really good someday. Just do good and keep up the good work.

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I like the last four lines the best! They just jump at me.

Aww, this is sweet, I love it...the best couple in my school broke up to O.O I love this, keep it up.

You seem to be quite the hopeless romantic. The section uder 'FROM THE DESK OF THE MENTAL PICKLE' caught my attention more than the poem though...hmm.. Keep writing =D

im sorry they broke up...lol...but i like this poem... those are questions we all ponder after a break up

Its OK dokey Sumi-chan, they weren't ment to be! XD Kidding. ^^; It is sad to know a cupole like them are over, it is. ;^; *cries with you* Same thing happened in my class ... 'scept we all saw it coming. -_-; Beautiful poem, powerful and melcholic. ^-^ Keep it up Sumi-chan!!

!~* Noelle *~!