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| Doray 2006-03-30 ch 1, | The allusions give it a humorous, delightful air within it. The words are well-chosen. |
| The Melancholy Astronaut 2006-03-25 ch 1, | Amazing amazing amazing. You're jealous of me? |
| James-Padfoot 2006-03-04 ch 1, | Damnit girl, you know i lovelove you right? You're brilliant. Positively brilliant. |
| The*Darkness*Combined 2006-02-02 ch 1, | The future's trapped cold in the past,A magnified reflection of glass. your an awsome writer. i wrote a poem based on your name. i kinda get inspired by everything. good job on this poem. i shall add it too my favorites. WRITE ON! |
| agirlnamed-aly 2005-11-20 ch 1, | Wow. Amazing. The poems so powerful it's almost hard to comprehend. I haven't really gotten the true meaning behind it, but nonetheless I love the way it was written. I loved how you capitalized certain words, thus adding certain meaning to the words - characterizing them as people. The biblical references were rather cryptic, but extremely compelling and engaging. Certain phrases just really caught my attention. All in all, wonderful work! |
| IgnitedIcicle 2005-11-12 ch 1, | This is so good I think it goes beyond the classification of a "poem", honestly. I could write a book from all the thoughts, images, feelings, and opinions conjured by this work. Surreal and cryptic/mystic; until the end. This has a strongly supported message. Which is also the clear-cut title. Even though very tragic on first glance, I LOVE how the story finds its' way Full Circle. *we oughta trust fate more, unless we wanna follow it like this* |
| Eeyore666 2005-06-27 ch 1, | wow, its been a while since u've written sum poetry (oor at least put it up here) but u've still got it, thats for sure, never stop writing, talk to u later then |
| colorguardgeek 2005-06-14 ch 1, | amazing work!! |
| Lyon Hart 2005-06-14 ch 1, | I really like the theme of this one.. Great Job! |
| Cuddle monster 2005-06-13 ch 1, | Boo! I read your review so now I'm reviewing you =P.This poem has made me jealous now. It's one of the many poems I wish I had written. I really like it. *Rae* |
| MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44 2005-06-11 ch 1, | this song just blows me away. You have so much talent. I love how you made even good virtues seeminvolved in the murder of the character. I give it 3.5. |
| poetic abortion 2005-06-11 ch 1, | * I have to give you four stars, striking me ill witted is defintly deserving of such high marks. :D I really am, I can not think of a single word of praise, encouragment or chritism. I think this may be close enough to it when I say this: utter perfection. !~* noelle *~! |
| Thimble 2005-06-09 ch 1, | that was amazing...when i first started reading it, i thought, "oh, i'll tell her i like this line", but by the end of the poem there were too many!! Anyways, responding that i got your e-mail so i thought i'd review something of yours, i haven't in a long time! This poem definetly deserves the highest the rank, a full 10 out of 10, that is 10 being the best of course! amazing imagery, i love the phrase you use, there are way to many to say i love the whole thing! And it flows easily too, with a good rhyme scheme. i have to say this is one of my top ten best poems i've ever read! keep writing and spreading the love (smiles*) oh, and...(wince*) not to sound like i'm begging or desperate but there's a story i just put on called "Curio" and maybe you could reveiw it? I never get any reviews on stories, and it's really short. Just tell me what you think( i don't really know how i am on writing stories) You don't have to, just a thought. Again, great poem! You're definetly going on my 'favorite authors' list and i have none! wow, that's all i can say, i have to read more of your stuff (and yes, i'm being serious!) cheerio darling!(as the british like to say) ! |
| Genuinely-xoxo-Superficial 2005-04-24 ch 1, | hi kait...i actually reli liked this poem... not because i understand it but because it's got a nice atmosphere, the sense of timelessness. I like also the cast you've gathered. they very nicely interwoven and don't intrude on each other's roles. I liked the feel here: Etched in porcelain and Hidden as for minuses (im really searching here, ok, dont get me wrong)... i think some parts lose the feel a bit but then you pick it up again...like you're stitching something but your needle chips somewhere. but it's still better than anything ive ever written :P ~over and out! |
| Anna178 2005-04-12 ch 1, | You really are amazing you know. I mean seriously, I hope I can achieve work as good as this someday. Though it isn't neccsarily your best, it still gets 3.something. |