i felt really identified with the last lines...i want to see more of your poetry

I like this ^_^ I'm really defensive of my friends, so I relate, this is awsome, keep it up.--pammy-

very creepy

well im not soi sure about the last bit, but besides that i absolutly loved it! Wicked idea, god I love karama...err except for the various times its come and bitten me! But i love format...the italics, the action and then the stating that the person is hurting themselves. A very sadistic, but almost satisfying emotion in this- nice one. ps: thankyou for the review! :D

love the part you wrote in italics. it kind of sets those bits apart, emphasizes them. the first stanza was a total attention-grabber. i like this, i like the spirit, the anger. nicely done. do me a favour and check out something i've written?

~k8

>__< If anyone messes with my friends, they regret it. O_o Yes, cuz I'm MeNtAl. XD xP I shal sick my evil hamsters on you! O__O Their NERDS sized po shall cover there body from head to toe. O_O XD ^^; *is hungre* i wouldn't mind eating Wonka NERDS now. Yum! *spits* OK, not so yum. -__-; I love the line: " the laws of karma" 'cause it soo true. (**, my karams bad. ;^;) Its such a simple line and yet it speaks true as the whole poem. I love it. The last few line especially are powerful. But can I ask: "What isnpired this?" It has a very personal feel to it and holds alot of anger and heart felt emotions. ^^;

!~* Noelle *~!