The description in this is really good. I like it.

Short but interesting and there definitely is something to it, the rhymes make it almost sound like an incantation, and I like the way the last line falls out of that pattern, thus mirroring the content, the wish to break that spell of coldness. Nice little piece.

i like it. very effective, i like the flow to it- it ties up neatly and has a kind of errie feeling to it.

oh man i know the feeling. especially when your nails start to look like you painted them purple. ^^ nicely conveyed here. i like the rhyme. :) good job.

i like this one- short and gets the point across. The story you left with your review wa hilarious- laughing is good for me when i'm in this sort of mood. Well, i'm off to bed, hopefully won't cry myself to sleep tonight, lol.

Excellent piece! You know, my feet turn purple too, and so do my mom's. Mother like daughter I suppose! :) I love how symbolic this poem is. Good work!

~Unimportant