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| tawnyfawn 2005-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseConsidering how short it was, you managed to really capture the essence of lava, which is good. I mean, having the whole 'right ammount of description' thing down pat. I always repeat myself saying the same thing about five times in poems. So well done! PLUS, THANKYOU SO MUCH for all your reviews! There were so many, and they were constructive, and- and- just generally brilliant! Thankyou! =D And I'm working on re-doing the previous chapters now, so soon they should be error free! (hopefully!) from fawny |
| Werecat99 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abuseNice imagery, considering the word count. :) |
| crazy dog events 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abusecool. what was the assignment your school gave you? |