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| Itsuyaya 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseA little funny, but I dont get it. Hey, maybe you can write a oneshot about this as a topic. Go into a little more detail. |
| anonymously-me 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseInteresting way to put things into perspective. |
| perpetual questions 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... What it says to me at least is that while others suffer, "scorched and burnt", we complain about the smallest things... Good job. |
| Infinite Abyss 2005-06-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. I liked it. |
| bitter-sweet-ana 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseit started it out intense, finished off humourous. it was unexpected. new. i liked it! nice humor :) and thanks for reviewing my story, that meant a lot to me! |
| tawnyfawn 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abuseWell, I interpreted it as the fact that human nature always makes us... well, pretty much, means we wont admit to crying. Interesting idea, and well executed. from fawny PS. Thanks for the review. =) |
| Infection 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abusethe last few lines were good, i liked it. ~infection~ |
| Citharia 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abuseNice. I like it. Thanks for sharing ^^ |
| Meaningless Julia 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abuseInteresting use of contrast. V good. |