A little funny, but I dont get it. Hey, maybe you can write a oneshot about this as a topic. Go into a little more detail.

Interesting way to put things into perspective.

Interesting... What it says to me at least is that while others suffer, "scorched and burnt", we complain about the smallest things... Good job.

That was good. I liked it.

it started it out intense, finished off humourous. it was unexpected. new. i liked it! nice humor :)

and thanks for reviewing my story, that meant a lot to me!

Well, I interpreted it as the fact that human nature always makes us... well, pretty much, means we wont admit to crying. Interesting idea, and well executed.

from fawny

PS. Thanks for the review. =)

the last few lines were good, i liked it. ~infection~

Nice. I like it.

Thanks for sharing ^^

Interesting use of contrast. V good.