Once again, wonderful poem. I can't get enough of your writing. >3

Wow . . . that was really well written and very creative. I like the dual versions, it's very unique. Both of them are similar, yet different and the uncensored makes things clearer. I think you did a great job, I am in awe of this. :Adds to FS:

I like how you relate the censored version showing what it really is uncensored, like how the white & red flowers are really bodies. Intense.-Jade