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| The Intelligent Designer 2007-07-11 ch 17,  | abuseBeautiful and magnificent. I fully enjoyed this and I loved the characters. Wonderful job. |
| SnuffSnuff 2007-04-04 ch 17, | abuseActually, I've decided to drop a review when I read the entire story, so I did read chapter three along with everything else, and it was a well-written story. You really should take to publishing this, though don't be afraid to add a little more detail. It was a really good story. ~Snuffie |
| SnuffSnuff 2007-04-04 ch 2, | abuseAww, how cute, although I do have a small problem with this chapter. Usually, they don't keep babies because they're just another bag of useless cargo, however, it's not a big deal. Man, poor Dante...anyway, onward to chapter three. ~Snuffie |
| SnuffSnuff 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. I thought the guy was gonna kill little Angel for a second there, but yes, I do feel sorry for both the baby and Dante. I shall read chapter two. ~Snuffie |
| HiryuuGekijou 2005-12-06 ch 17, | abuse*wails* Oh no! You make me so sad! I can't read any more of your stuff tonight cause it makes me wanna go either on a binge (without the purge) or go find a random dude to curl up with and cry. :( Anyways, on a brighter note (well, not really), this was a wonderful story. And Dante was an awesome character, and Gabriel was so sweet and kind and reminded me a lot of my own character till he went and told King Assish-holey. *wails* And then threw himself off a cliff! OH NO! I really do love stories about this era though, its always so magical, even though theres rape and pillaging and blah blah. You did a good job with it, bravo! I need to go binge now... *walks away sniffling* Poor Dante... |
| HiryuuGekijou 2005-12-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was a good freaking intro. I have to say, the battle over Troy is one that takes good skill to write, and you've done it wonderfully. |
| Dragonblade65 2005-12-03 ch 17, | abusei love this story so much T_T but it's so sad! short but very sweet, and it stirred something in me that few story's ever done before. i really love it ^-^ definately on my favorite's list! |
| Kamiavee 2005-09-10 ch 17, | abuseI've never thought the story is a tragic one...(sobbing) :'(~I can't accept the death of Dante anyhow and the story is so sombre.I love it nevertheless. :'] |
| virginangelic 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI find it ironic that the title says "Don't cry" yet here i am wiping away my tears. The story was achingly beautiful and painful to even read. I can't imagine the hell Dante went through. |
| Frosted Midnight 2005-07-13 ch 17, | abusethis was ..absolutely awsome, yet such a sad ending *sniffles* but I loved it ! you are truly a talented writer! |
| xanthofile 2005-06-28 ch 17, | abusei find it ironic that the title of this fic is exactly the opposite to what it made me do. very beautiful and...tragic. i never cry, but i did while reading this...it's seriously under-reviewed. just thought i ought to let you know that. excellant talent as a writer. |
| Ailenat 2005-06-25 ch 17, | abusei love this storyi cried soo hard at the endthe scene where Gabriel watched Dante die and Illias sail off with Dante was beautiful |
| Krvinma 2005-06-12 ch 13, anon. | abuseThey may be in love, but they are both very stupid. |
| Lucifer's Sonata 2005-06-10 ch 17, | abusethat was wonderful!! *sobs* it was sad...but so wonderful! i HATE Gabriel...gah... i hope he died a slow and painful death... I meant he king sucks but i hate Gabs more so *nods* i'm just sad it ended so quickly!! oh well, it was such greatness ^^ |
| Misskah 2005-05-30 ch 16, | abuseaww...*sniffle* make me cry...but it was really really good! |