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| SweetWithUncertainty 2006-04-23 ch 1,   | so short, but one of the saddest things I've ever read. beautiful job |
| Katterree Fengari 2005-09-07 ch 1, | not all the things make sense to me, though I guess if he died when they were two, it would be like not having a father at all...cus he could still be in their prayers and dreams even if he's dead. I'm not sure if he wants to be alive again, or if he just wants a more active role in their mind. This is good, it has potential for being a lot stronger though. I'm a little confused by why it's so short - it almost reads like a poem. |
| Pheobe Meryll 2005-09-03 ch 1, | This is going straight to my favorites list, to stay there FOREVER. I'm usually not a big fan of father-daughter sentiment (since I don't exactly have an ideal relationship...) but this was SO touching. It's what every father should wish and probably does wish when he sees his child, at least for the first time. And the sweetest part is that it is the father speaking from heaven, presumably. Wonderful. Don't pay attention to people who say it's too short - it's not!! Fatherhood summed up in 8 sentances is not "too short" - it's brilliant. |
| Triden 2005-08-19 ch 1, | way too short. sorry, but it's true! |
| kashe 2005-05-17 ch 1, | im sorry im to lazy to logg in. first of all im sorry i didnt respond to your review for a while! but now i am and i read your profile and alread you are considered and AWESOME person! anyway on to the reveiw part of this review: this is so great!! its really really short but its really touching and deep and meaningful. i love it. absolutly love it. |
| StrikerJin 2005-04-27 ch 1, | I have to agree with the other person it is a beutiful writing. |
| DementedOracle 2005-04-23 ch 1, | Hmm. If dead men could talk, I'm sure this is what they'd say. Though it seems kind of like a hopeless cause, since, you know, at two years old, nobody's going to be able to remember much about a dead father. Kinda sad, when I think about it that way. P.S. I read your profile. Thank you for several chuckles. |
| PyroHiroshi 2005-04-10 ch 1, | The hearts of men. :) Beautiful. |