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| Arkash 2005-05-07 ch 1,   | Excellent! If the hopelessness and uncreativity had died, something must have borne out of them/her. Like a Phoenix rising from its own ashes, splendid, as it soars into the sky. Great Job!! *_* |
| SilverSpinner 2005-04-28 ch 1, | Oh, wow... The very first line just makes me breathe deeply, I love it. Amazing stuff here. |
| Escapist 2005-04-20 ch 1, | "with my body dishevelled from the heat of my awkward paper prison cell?":As I interpreted it, this is the perfect line for any writer of any kind. and take away all my saving graces,replace them with distant and cold faces You're my absolute favorite. |
| shola 2005-04-13 ch 1, | Not as lyrically finessed as some of your other pieces. But that sort of allows for this kind of bald emotion the shine through it, what with the mis matched imagery and jagged metre. A really interesting deviation, two thumbs up, fine holiday fun! |
| Aslan Israel 2005-04-12 ch 1, | Lots of anger. Wonderful meanings in this. Came together very well. I can see where you're coming from, though I can't imagine my God doing that. You made your point well. Brava. |
| Second-Hand-Screamo 2005-04-12 ch 1, | Oh. Awesome! I LOVE this poem, you're going on my faves. There's so many great one-shot lines in here, they just shine out. Great job, even if you don't like it. |
| crooked on paper 2005-04-11 ch 1, | "you were an experiement in hopelessness and uncreativity." That was delicious. |
| Last Dance 2005-04-11 ch 1, | I dont care what you think, I really like this. It has really beautiful imagery in it. Thank you for all the reviews, they mean alot to me... |
| twenty-second seduction 2005-04-10 ch 1, | i really, really hope you're joking when you say that you don't think it's good. it's beyond good.it's brilliant. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-04-10 ch 1, | this is another great poem. i love it, i really do. keep writing :D |
| Devil's Footprint 2005-04-10 ch 1, | This is an awesome poem, very thought-provoking and meaningful. Brilliant. |
| The Melissa Occult 2005-04-10 ch 1, | I loved it, it connected with me, really did, do robots go to heaven? |
| Momentary Sins 2005-04-10 ch 1, | i like it's almost story-like form. i dont know what you're talking about when you say you dont like it, but you probably dont want to hear that. really... i like this. |