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| x3life 2008-06-29 ch 1,   | aw this was so cute =) |
| alittlebitconfused 2008-05-06 ch 1, | Good... I like how you don't include the fight, just the one thing that she said, you avoided what might have been an awkward transition well. The end's a little clunky - it just happened. And if you're not paying attention, and just a little loopy from lack of sleep like me, you forget that he's just her friend. Bringing that up again would probably help. Great job though :) |
| Kaede Kitsurani 2007-12-17 ch 1, | Short and sweet are always awesome sdjectives for one shots. =) Anyway, awesome job! |
| Pop the Bubble 2007-10-06 ch 1, | aw... that made me cry... :( yet another one in my favourites =] x |
| s-pecial-lee me 2007-05-03 ch 1, | aww sweet. though if it was me, i would probably bash him then kiss him. lol |
| xoxluurve 2007-04-11 ch 1, | adorable. (: you just inspired me. haha. ♥xoxluurve |
| bulletproof lemon 2006-05-24 ch 1, | omg, that was so cute. short, but really sweet. liked it lots.it was well written. Peace. |
| curiouserandcuriouser 2005-07-23 ch 1, | i LOVE this!! it is (just as you said) short and sweet. it's so cute. it's like an laternate ending to one of the chaotic episodes of my life. sadly, this ends MUCH happier than when it happens to me, lol. could you do me a favor and read my story? i'm new on fictionpress and could really use some help. thanks so much and keep on churning out more great stuff! |
| Element Sarah 2005-04-11 ch 1, | I love it! Those I'd like to know why he said that in the first place... *shrugs* ...But it wakes up the imagination, so it doesn't matter. |
| Chocolate Herrings 2005-04-11 ch 1, | Aw, it was cheesy as hell but I still teared up! Of course, I am very emotional right now and I'm going through some nasty relationship issues at the moment so...that could be part of it. Still - I liked it ~_^ "All things considered, insanity may be the only reasonable alternative." |
| Anotherlovesickteen 2005-04-11 ch 1, | Really sweet! |
| anamika 2005-04-11 ch 1, | cute yes extremely cheesy but cute |