That's so cute that you wrote this together! I love the descriptions!

Sweet poem guys. I like the last two stanzas. Great job.

OMG! so sweet i luv it!! reminds me so much of my first kiss! Awesome poem!

To the half that SymphyGRL wrote:Wonderful poem ^_^ Isn't mutual poetry fun?? :D

OOH! What a beautifull description of a first kiss ;)! Keep Writing!