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Reviews For: A, B, C and D - Reviews: Page 1 of 7

True.Randomness 2008-02-08 ch 28,	abuseThis was a very interesting story. I liked the way the names were chosen, it was quiet amuzing.
Kynn 2006-10-29 ch 29,	abuseI have to say I absolutely loved this story. I am definitely adding this as one of my favorites. This story was original (I especially liked the alphabet part, once I figured it out, hehe), the characters were fun, lively, and they didn't all have the same personality with a few differences (I see a lot of that in other stories). The ‘real attraction’ was really cool as well. Its so trite reading stories were two characters meet, greet, exchange witty repartee, and immediately hop into bed together proclaiming their undying love to each other. I mean, how often does that actually happen? Anywho. I've been a fan since I started reading Crystalline Flaws and when I got to the end of what you have already finished I moved on to your other works. I don't review until after finishing a story anymore, because nothing else smarts more than an author whose work you review regularly only to have them dump the story or totally ditch out before it’s completed. After this happening a couple times, irking me to no end, I now only review at the end of a completed story, unless I truly know the author is going to finish. I truly love most all of your stories. Keep up the great work and I will definitely keep visiting in hope of finding new material to read and/or finish reading others. Later, Kynn.
mechante fille 2006-05-21 ch 29,	abuseWhat a great story! Using the alphabet was a really cool idea. Almost like a grown up version of alphabet stories for kids. And writing it all so quickly! I'm much impressed with that! And of course, the actually characters and plot were just lovely! I'm so glad that everything worked out. I had hoped it would... but wasn't sure how you would pull it off. Great job with the twisting and turning and such. And getting everyone happily set up, romance-wise. Even Severin! hahaha ^_^ And Kilian, well... perhaps Death will take a liking to him.
Yoyo-chan 2005-09-30 ch 29,	abuseOk, that was cute but not nearly as good as pretty much everything else I've read of yours so far XP Also I have something very important. NEVER AGAIN name chapters like that XP Some of these chapter titles completely spoil the chapter. The idea is to get the people to read the chapter and when the cliffhanger is "oh noes will _ win?" and the next chapter title is "_ is defeated!" then the cliffhanger is instantly gone XP I can kind of see a situation where you might want something like that (like in a fairy tale that sort of follows a standard line but not really? Then giving it titles like that would work but you'd have to be careful). But not for something completely original. XP Also I liked Dinael and Amerial was cool too. Neat names XP Cwery is very weird spelling but somehow it works as a name. How did you come up with it?
pneumothorax 2005-07-05 ch 28,	abuseReadable fic although slightly formal and stiff in parts.
Pink Raine 2005-07-04 ch 29,	abuseyo i just read the whole thing. interesting use of the alphabet... i quite like Cwery def my fave character. but i was also obscenely amused by the insults. u know who i speak of. lol.
pneumothorax 2005-07-04 ch 2,	abuseA little surreal but good descriptions. I like it.
pneumothorax 2005-07-04 ch 1,	abuseInteresting point to stand. Sounds intruiging.. if not puzzlign as to how to say their names.
M Welles 2005-06-17 ch 29,	abuseThat was such a cute story. I really like the concept of the alphabet being used as names. Very clever, indeed! Well done on such a well-written story :o xMegan
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-06-09 ch 28,	abuseWEE. The ending. A freaking cute and really HAPPY so I'm happy ending. I love you. Yay about the side story. Lol. What can I say? I'm a hopeless fangirly person. Heh. They're always so adorable to me. I adore that. Because that kind of fluffy type relationship is all but gone from stories now. And woo for the other couple that I'm too lazy to really mention. Lol. I loved this story. LOTS. And I can't wait for whatever else you write in the future. much love
xxbloody-heartsxx 2005-06-09 ch 28,	abuseaww...how sweet, Amerial and Dinael are all together and whatnot. Very nice ending, especially the part about Severin being a erm...popular inmate, I laughed for a really long time on that one, but its rather fitting no? Happy endings all around, I'm just sad it's over. -sniff sniff-
Maris. S 2005-06-04 ch 27,	abuseYa know what, I was thinking of how reviews could be related to Band-Aids, but I couldn't think of one x.x One more chapter and a hot lemon scene and closure! Awesome! lol Please update sooN!
Maris. S 2005-06-04 ch 26,	abuselol I like how this senario ended. It was koolieso. Despite the kiss and everything between Amerial and 'Lord **' Daniel made up for it ^^ Please update soon!! (when you can ^^)
Aoi Mitsuko 2005-06-03 ch 27,	abuseOkai, the Isabell thing was cliche, but she needed someone to love her! lmao, last chapter? there isn't going to be a seqwul is there? sniffle but I can't wait for the lemon! ;) update soon,Ms.Lucy
Naomi Schemer 2005-06-03 ch 27,	abusegivess you a band-aid well, I didn't read this for two days, and you updated. My Gods. I can't wait for the next chapter, even though I'm not that much into lemons.

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