FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseTouching. Good spin on the poem. Great story. |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-04-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I like that you added the poem. I feel sorry for both Stephen and Jane. I don't know who I should feel more sad for though, they obviously both have issues to deal with. I like this short story all the same. Keep it up. |