Well I do feel that it was a bit fast, but then this chapter made up for it with the explanation of the rest of the time with the nuns. I just wish I could have read about Brenda's reaction to her first sights of London. O well. Nice chapter.

Great chapter. How saddening the betrayal. But every "chapter" in Brenda's life helps her grow. It is nice to see her grow as a character.

Oh dear, it sounds like her father has come to sponge off of her! Poor Brenda...

A fantastic chapter, I enjoyed reading this, and look forward to reading the next chapter.

What a horrible bunch. Why people have to be as mean and nasty as that I don't know. I knew several girls like that when i went to school. Nasty people. A great read, it really upset me to read about how nasty they were. A great story it makes a great read.

Uh-oh, poor Brenda. I wonder why those girls were ganging up on her, and then pretending to be her friends. That sucks.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Great chapter! More establishment of characters with Patricia as mean, and then I am not too sure about Amy b/c of that funny look that passed quickly. Hopefully you'll explain that in the next chapter. Can't wait!

I feel so sorry for Brenda, sounds like Patty is going to make her life at the convent absolutely miserable . Poor Brenda.

Nice chapter, although not too much happened. One thing I noticed though, I thought you already explained some of those rules in one of the past chapters. Maybe I'm wrong, but it just seems like a lot of things were repeated.

And thanks for reviewing my story! I always love getting replies from you. You're so talented and I really appreciate your comments.

I must have been really stupid though, because I didn't even realize that your name was Amy. I'd always wondered what aims stood for but the name Amy never came to mind. Now I see it though. It's a very pretty name!

Well Brenda is a bit naive, but that's alright. She hasn't been around too many peers. She'll get wise soon, and grow into a good human being.

Good chapter. More explanation of a new setting, some establishment of new characters and some "girl talk." :)

Even though, like you said, this chapter wasn't the most exciting, it was certainly necessary to show the readers what Brenda's new life is like at the orphanage. I hate Amy already! And it's funny that you should name her Amy because in the story I'm writing now the main character lived at an all-girls school and the meanest girl was named Amy Rigby. How funny!

Well, I can't wait to read more of Brenda's new life in London. Update soon!

This was a great chapter, the attention to detail is what makes the story so good. I enjoyed reading it. I look forward to reading more of Brenda and her life at the convent. Till next time bye bye!

It was kind of sad when her aunt died, and now she's moving to London. And Francis's health is beginning to worry me. I hope Brenda would meet him in London.

This is pretty good so far. Srry haven't reviewed in awhile. Just not getting caught up on all stories. I really like the way this is going. I have been dying for you to write the Brenda story. I think this story will be even better than the other two.