Reviews for He Tells Creation of His Mastery

dollface and her cancer 2006-08-02 ch 1,	abusei have never in my life read evolution defined so - prettily. with haunting detail. clearly your key line here, i think, is "they had no future". and the perfect repetition of it only makes this stronger. add that one cold line to the distant feeling of the narration here, and... wow. i am impressed.
Sharakinpaix 2005-04-11 ch 1,	abuseMy interpretation: Men have no future, but the Divine has no choice but to give them life? (Sorry I had some trouble understanding the beautiful repetition and symbolism of mitochondria at the end.) Even when I can't understand something you write it's still beatiful. Well done!
Arkash 2005-04-11 ch 1,	abuseThis is an excellent beginning. It reminded me of one of my essays, Evolution vs Creation. Great job!
UnknownLove 2005-04-11 ch 1,	abusenice work.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-04-11 ch 1,	abusethat was entrancing. almost like "2001 A Space Odyssey"- at the end, that's what it took me to (I'm supposed to read that book, I shall soon.)