I'm looking at zombies in a new light now. And here I thought all they wanted was brains. LoL!

But anyway it's a very good story so far! Keep it up!

I like your story. It's great. Umm... sorry but I have no criticism. Your grammar is good, your spelling is good, you space lines well, and your plot is running smoothly. Keep up the good work and update!

A near-perfect mix of humour and supernatural goings-on. Keep it up!

THIS STORY IS SO FREKIN GOOD> AND FUNNY> I"LL KILL MY SELF AND RELIVE IT AGAIN. GREAT JOB>

This is very orginal. Never seen a story written like this before.

LOl hell is a train.

This story is really fun to read. I don't think I've ever really read ANYTHING remotely like it. Your idea's are very cool.

(Being a zombie, it wasn’t like I could say: “No, get your own coffee and kill your own damn ambassador.”)

That was too funny XD