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Capt J.E. Carrales 2005-04-22 . chapter 1
"Why" is an excellent poem. The answer to "why" is an on going thing. I think that we have so much trouble understaning the "meaning of life" (Monty Python aside) because it is on going, fluidic and ever changing.

To begin to understand it would mean you would have to see it all, start, duration and finish. Saddly to see the end of it is to die.

That is why I pray there is an after life. "Mori est termina, non" Death is the end...NOT!
Topazmunk 2005-04-18 . chapter 1
different from other poems i have read, good job though. give it a little tune-up and it will be spiffy.
Rose of Darkness 666 2005-04-11 . chapter 1
Interesting...very nice. It could use a little tweaking I think...but pretty good overall.
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