Reviews for So I didn’t kick the ball…

Reviews For: So I didn’t kick the ball…

Purpose 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abuseNo, that wasn't bad. It was poetry, because it was full of emotion. I like the part where you're talking about all the things that will matter.
Ramenluver 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseXD I really liked this. It made me laugh. -Ramen
RoseGirl1212 2006-04-21 ch 1,	abusei liked it a lot! you write really good poems about how silly stuff in life is! good job and keep writing! P.S. i like it the way it is!
DemonicDestiny 2006-04-17 ch 1,	abuseThis is true. Sometimes I actually miss just to get them mad...lol! You know what? I'm proud to be a loser! Anyways great poem.
Mr. Shmee 2005-09-03 ch 1,	abuseI loved it Glowing Aura... but a few little extra things don't need to be in there... it makes the poem to wordy... but otherwise... I love it... and it sounds like my game of Dodgeball yesterday... (I was one of the first out!) and our team lost! :D
Rusty And The Rubix Horse 2005-07-14 ch 1,	abuseNice job on this. I hope to see more of your writing in the future.
Thomas White 2005-06-13 ch 1,	abuseNice, very true
Arcane Hero 2005-05-28 ch 1,	abuseOh boy, I really know how this feels. I really hate P.E and I'm sadly the only one besides my friend sarah. I used to get yelled at all the time, but luckly I don't have to take P.E next year. Muhahahaha I can now spend all of my time in the Art room! But anyways, this is really good. ^_^
addictedtolamps 2005-05-18 ch 1,	abuseAWESOME i love it dont change it!
The Libran Iniquity 2005-05-10 ch 1, anon.	abuselol, I sympathise completely!, although I was better with non-contact sports, meself ;)Great poem.
Once in a blue moon 2005-04-14 ch 1,	abuseNice and refreshing. It held together very well (although I would have varied the word I used the second time, rather than say 'loser' twice: "And made you look like a loser/ Because I didn’t kick a piece of rubber/ So that makes me the loser.") Also, thanks for the review! grin

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