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| Chazzypoo 2005-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseNah, it wasn't short, it was as good length on the scroll bar. It was pretty good, for starters, and I can tell it's gonna get interesting. But do try to cut down on the numbers unless the charactors are time management freaks then write the numbers out. Sorry, it's just a habit hammered into my head at school, but I think that you could do without all the minute numbers. Hope ya update soon! |
| Phantom Lover 2005-04-12 ch 1, | abuseHey there, great story you have here, the plotline is really interesting and some parts of the story is really hiliarous. I'm definately looking forward to the next chapter. Keep on writting. Phantom~Lover |