Interesting piece, very intense. It's packed with emotions that would be enough for a longer story.

Good Job!! *_*

I'm in Europe now, connected to the internet on a cell phone and for some reason it won't let me sign in.

First of all, thanx so much for the review, and I am so ashamed I made such a stupid mistake! From now on, you must catch my mistakes because it really helps me out! Despite what you may think, I love making my grammar and spelling perfect.

Anyway, I think this story was really good because it was a very unique concept; so original, very much like a lot of your other things since you express your own opinions. The narrator was so cynical; I liked the part about not saying I love you and not being angry about it. Great work, girl. Now start updating Dusman (I can see you aiming a hatchet at my head for that...so I will quietly shuffle behind this rock so I'll be safer...).

Also, now I can kind of see a little better why you didn't like the "cliche" romance in Howl's Moving Castle, but I still stand by my opinion that it was super cute and romantic. I'm cynical sometimes, too, but with a movie like that...it's the only Miyazaki movie I've seen (and I've seen almost all) in which the two lovebirds kiss, so I was *so* happy! I got all teary-eyed...but I totally respect your opinion on it...and I love Howl.

Anyway, keep on writing, Koe! Good luck with Maya. I'll see you later.

hello! such emotional phrases that tear at your heartstrings, a masterpiece for sure! i have updated DARK BLIND ICE and I'm stuck w/ Immortal Phantom. Can't wait for more updates, talk to you later!-anime freakizoid X^_^X

Yes, this is me. I'm too tired to say anything else besides: this is biting and drifting at the same time - which is what I think you intended so good job. *yawn* have to go to sleep...didn't get any friggin AP stuff done - stupid, stupid Writing homework that yielded nothing but ? (yes, nothing but question marks...as in "why did I write that?").'NightYoo-jin

this is a really touching story. It has so much emotions and descriptions. Closely related to my song, Letting You Go. I can really relate to this in many ways. great job!

~Sorrow~

Ouch. Like a barbed arrow in my heart, in my head, you've struck eloquently with this beautifully sad piece of work. I especially like the line "Molten lava searing off the skin till the muscle is visible kind of pain." It's very graphic and I love the visual; I could feel the heat and the skin melting. ^-^