*blink* what an ending. :) This is unique, and you've put it down in a much more readable way than actual thoughts are yet manage to retain the scattered confusion that define chains of thoughts. Amusing and enjoyable.

This one made me fall in love with you.

The complex descriptions and random fragments that descend into something that relates - although, at the same time, a contradiction and something totally different - made this beautiful. I love the colorful descriptions and I loved the descending insanity.

Great job. :)

Full of frangmented sentences and ideas. Others may find this wierd, but I like it a lot. I agree with some of the sentaments you express. Great job. Some of the best poetry is written when you're not quite coharent. ;)

Please R&R some of my work. I'll return the favor.

ok its weird, but i love it. i like the crazed quality of it. good job.

Honestly? I'm not going to pretend I understood that. But it was very unique, and had a pretty sound... Not meaning, sound. Colourful descriptions... Of what? No idea. I liked it anyway, lol.