My eyes are watring now. The first part I can relate to... I haven't seen my best friedn in over a year, we live thousands of miles apart. That was an aamzing poem.

aw... *sniffles and wipes tear*

i'm speechless. if i can judge anything of your life by your writing, we are SO similar. omg. i love this!

i am so emotional lol

but i know when i read an awesome poem and i love this :D

aw, thats very good.

this is a great poem ^_^

Expressive and emotional, lovely job. Great read =).

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Wow. That whole poem was so charged with pain. It is an amazing piece of work, however, and I enjoyed reading it.

wow very moving...you did very well expressing yourself and your friend...

yet another touching and inspirational piece. It deep and strong emotions that cling to the words nicely. great work!

~Sorrow~

P.S. I changed my sn, it used to be Age-of-Songs but now its Sorrowful Dreams.

I really like this poem it is written with feeling and because of a feeling and I like poems like that because they make me feel. About your short story- "Cry me a River" I can relate to the feeling a whole lot and I love the dialogue within the self. But, I think you should leave it just how it happened some things are meant just to hang. Suspense is a great element, I as a writer and reader BELIEVE THAT!

Very nice. I loved the formatting of this, how it was broken up.

There's a lot of emotion behind this, and I think it's conveyed to the reader.

Wow...I'm so sorry. This makes me so sad.