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Reviews For: One Last Time

i-rite-gud 2005-07-01 ch 1,	My eyes are watring now. The first part I can relate to... I haven't seen my best friedn in over a year, we live thousands of miles apart. That was an aamzing poem.
angelfromurnightmare 2005-04-29 ch 1,	aw... sniffles and wipes tear i'm speechless. if i can judge anything of your life by your writing, we are SO similar. omg. i love this! i am so emotional lol but i know when i read an awesome poem and i love this :D
chewing GUM 2005-04-19 ch 1,	aw, thats very good.
putz-6 2005-04-18 ch 1,	this is a great poem ^_^
chochang913 2005-04-17 ch 1,	Expressive and emotional, lovely job. Great read =). chochang913
Neferbast 2005-04-17 ch 1,	Wow. That whole poem was so charged with pain. It is an amazing piece of work, however, and I enjoyed reading it.
Rogue Ronin 2005-04-17 ch 1,	wow very moving...you did very well expressing yourself and your friend...
Sorrowful Dreams 2005-04-14 ch 1,	yet another touching and inspirational piece. It deep and strong emotions that cling to the words nicely. great work! ~Sorrow~ P.S. I changed my sn, it used to be Age-of-Songs but now its Sorrowful Dreams.
InnerBeauty 2005-04-12 ch 1,	I really like this poem it is written with feeling and because of a feeling and I like poems like that because they make me feel. About your short story- "Cry me a River" I can relate to the feeling a whole lot and I love the dialogue within the self. But, I think you should leave it just how it happened some things are meant just to hang. Suspense is a great element, I as a writer and reader BELIEVE THAT!
Narijima 2005-04-12 ch 1,	Very nice. I loved the formatting of this, how it was broken up. There's a lot of emotion behind this, and I think it's conveyed to the reader.
WiltingBlackRose 2005-04-12 ch 1,	Wow...I'm so sorry. This makes me so sad.

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