this is a great poem! its really thoughtful and sad but also completely captures the reader, its one of those things that you just have to keep reading and then read it again because of the brilliance that it is. its a really great poem!

also i noticed you added me to your faveriotes, i feel so privelaged as you are a brilliant poet!

oh my...this is the most beautiful piece of art that I have read today...and I read a lot,I mind you...This really made me feel sad,and I have my heart in my throat as I am writing this.

*takes a deep bow in respect*