Nice work, you show promise. Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing.

*wide eyes*such thigns makes me upset to read for certain...I always gfet so easily upset by this kind of stories or poems,they affect me deeply...*thumbs up*you ar eindeed a marvelous a wonderful writer hwne it comes to poems,I mind you that.and the way you make these poems so full of emotion...well,I am at loss of words.

*from your fan*

haha! you never cease to amaze me! i love it! i love them all! and they're all so personal, which is good. i can only write about the red sox and harry potter. i could never do this! keep this up and dont lose this poetry streak! its going good

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! I absouletly loved it. my friend nezt to me(Lisseth) loved it too! I also want to say that your poem was so romantic!

this is really beautiful!!and it's interesting to know how guys feel ... the same way as girls! of course, you're only human beeings to but sometimes I just wonder...anyway! I love this poem!

Aw, that's sad. Very good though :)