Nice story this poem tells here. I am amazed by the craftsmanship here. Try checking out my works whenever you've got some time.

hey, how are you? great new update, sorry it took me so long to review. great job, i can't wait to see what will happen in this glorious story. i have had some new updates, i hope you like them...-anime freakizoid X^_^X

aw, such a sweet ending.

angels or not, what a wonderful love.

oh that is heartbreaking.such a good story though, i smile every time you update it

I should be shocked by the oddness of their relationship, but I'm not. Update soon.

this.. is somewhat sad. i don't know why. i like Shawn.. but i think his love for her is not all that? normal? but.. yea this story is great.

what a wonderful but sad update, awesome job my friend! i wonder what will happen next, each ending is full of simple suspense! can't wait for the next one, thanks for a read that starts off another year.-anime freakizoid

oh, its so innocent and raw.it almost tears your heart out.

i love how you capture the image from a 5 year old's point of view.its super simple to write like that.

great, i will continue reading if you continue posting it.

aww...i feel so bad for her! please update this soon!

*puddle*

This is such a cute story! you have to put up more (if you do, more reviews.) Ah, the art of bribery.

-SapphireIris

aw...This really is charming. Right when I noticed the choppy sentences, I was intrigued and I couldn't stop reading. I love this. Update soon.

oh and thank you for your review.

YOu have a really awesome, original style with this one. It seems as if it really is being written by a little girl just be the odd things she thinks to tell or remind you. And just as you said it is really charming!

Sweet chapter. Still childlike but seemingly direction-less.

That is so sweet. You've made her sound so much like a real life kindergartener. That's awesome. Hurry and post!