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| emilyrachel18 2006-01-25 ch 1,   | I've just found a poem i haven't read yet yippee! I like the begining of this poem babes and the ending is excellant too, i think in places the rythm is out ever so slightly but the emotion that is evident in it is amazing. Plz rite some more! |
| xHannahx 2005-04-16 ch 1, | **hugs** i cant imagine how you must feel right now, but whatever's going on you have my very best wishes. brilliant poem btw. Han. |
| QueenVixta 2005-04-16 ch 1, | I like this a lot. Beautiful piece. I just really like it and it's great! Rock on, QueenVixta. |
| Damo 2005-04-15 ch 1, | Hey Allycred, Alex,Brilliant poem. I can't find the right words to describe it. Hope Your Well. Ian Says Hi and He also loves the poem. Best Wishes, Damien |
| Rosanna28 2005-04-14 ch 1, | Aww, I'm so sorry you have to go through something like this. I know what it's like when a friend (especially a best friend) who does that to you...It sucks so much. But this poem, it's so beautiful and full of emotion. I really, really loved it!! I hope everything will get better for you and your friend and that you work everything out. ^_^ Much love, Rosanna. |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-04-13 ch 1, | Very powerful emotions, it jsut hit me. I had this problem as well with one of my friends,I hope that yours ends better then mine. Also don't be sorry, its good that you wrote this. This is a very powerful piece and that makes it one of your best in my books. Keep it up. |
| Keith Andrew 2005-04-13 ch 1, | Thats good alex. i hope you too are okay with each other...-Keith Andrew I love you |
| angel-of-woe 2005-04-13 ch 1, | very nicley written i could feel the emotion floweing thru it as i read, good one! |
| Kressida 2005-04-13 ch 1, | I'm sorry, so sorry... i just hope you'll forgive me for what ive done someday. this was beautiful and so sad, it made me cry too.. once again, im so so sorry my bestfriend, although i dont know if you still want me as yours.. ill always love you and youll always have a special place in my heart. if not, im glad i was lucky enough to know you.. love Zai |
| twistedtruths 2005-04-12 ch 1, | Great poem, I really felt your pain in it.I really hope things work out with your best friend. But I'm sure if you are really best friends and care for each other you'll find a way to get through it. |
| putz-6 2005-04-12 ch 1, | this is a great poem you put alot of emotion into it good job ^_^ |
| dancingintherain 2005-04-12 ch 1, | i can feel the pain you had while you wrote this...its very strong and raw with emotion... aww, love comes and goes, friends are forever...if she cares about you, and you care about her, it won't be the end... hope everything turns out okay... lovely poem by the way... muchLUB-kerr |
| Mafortion 2005-04-12 ch 1, | Very nicely written! |
| The System Mother 2005-04-12 ch 1, | Hm, strong and meaningful. Good job. |
| Rascarin 2005-04-12 ch 1, | The poem is beautifully written, I can feel the pain... Hope things work out for you... |